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SUPER SPECIAL MAGICAL MARY SUE ADVENTURE TIEM!

Kaptain Kidd was so super storng. and he just LURVED girls soooo much! (btw: Kid is sew hawwt!!!1)  oen day he found this gurl all stranded on an islnad and was all, "Shes so prett!" and then he was alll Killer! Get her on board noaw!" So killer got her on, and then kidd was all, "sh'e spretty!!" and then the girl woke up. who are you? i am captin kidd! who areu? and then she stood up all pretty and puffed her booooobes in his face (I SAID BOOBES! :D) and he was all blusihng. then he was like "Yur so pretty! what's yur nam?" and the gloriouus mysterious girl stoof up and was all, " my name is Trixie D. Fancysons! I am 1 of the daughters of D!" but what were you doing ther?" Killer asked her, and hse looked a t him. Flipping her golden currls of hair into the breezey occean like air, she winked and was allll, "Im a castway, ! my father was an evil guy who didnt like me, nad then my mother was always jelouas of my beauty!" "I kan see Y!" Kidd excalmimed all of the sudden, a nother lbush on his facee. Andthen killer was like, "Captina! Let her finish!' and kid kinda looked at killer. Also, the wonderful mysterious beautyy continued., "I has the power to see the future!" and the whole Kidd crew was all like "Whut?!" (That reminds of this tiem and like me and mah friends were hanging out, and then one of them said something, and the n we ere all like WHUT?! it was SOOOOOO FunnY!1) Then, all these mnostes showed! up! "OMG!" kidd was kinda freaking out, "Wjere did these mponsters come from?! and then ,b4 any one could do anyrthing, Trixie wasa flying through the air, sowrd clenchted in her mouthe and her body like a dog. She defeat ed all the mosnsters and kidd was al, 'Aww! I didn't even get to fight one, babeyy!" and she was like. "Sorrye hony! But that's what yuou get when yor slow!!"" and then KilleR was like, "What was that?! " andshe was ll ,"i have te power of the Bark Bark fruit! it aloows ame to transoform into a beautiful dog!" and then kidd was looking at her body, all wett and soaking thrw her white shrt and he coudn't halp but blush somemoar. "I ned you know, bab!" he said as he yanked her into hsi room. " But I barly now you, eustass! '(I think eustass is an icky name :P) and then Kidd was all, "yo knoe me FINE honey!" and then they started to kiss. and then Trixie was like, "Kid i need you now!" so kiddd all reached over and got some lubb and was like, smearing it on his cawk. thne, Trixie was like, "Ohh! Youre so bigg, kaptain cid!" and he was like, "it's gunna hurt!" ansd she was all, "I'vm sure i can haNdle it, big boi!" and then they had hoawt steamy sex all night. when kidd woke up in the moring, she was gone!! "Trixie!" he called out, looking for her, and she was not there, said Killer. leaning over the railing of his shipe, kid lloked over and siged, "She was theonly gurl for me!" he whispered, crying into his shouldeer.. *switicxhing to Trixie* "Sorry i had to leaveyou Kidd! I'll be back once I fulfil mah desitny!" and the sun rose over her prettyy body, showeing hwer off."

A/N: CHAPPIE 1 DONE! I used mahself, even though mah name is n't Trixie, but I lurv Kidd SEW much! He is soo hot, wow! Review plz!!1 I give tyou lots of cookes!! Plus, Ima thinking about making this another chappter! SHOULDI?!? :D
This is mostly a response to the journal I just wrote. Consequently, it took me, like, twenty minutes to right, and absolutely thought was put into it. Except for the spelling. I had to actually think to spell that bad.

And I KNOW not all Mary-Sues are like this, so don't freak out. But ... that's how they look when I read them.
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And a HUGE thanks to Devon for drawing this lovely picture!! [link]

It totally inspired me to write this thing in the first place. For a better description of WHY we did this, go look at her wonderful picture. :heart:

Trixie D. Fancysons (c) Devon
~ Danielle
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Mikan-bases Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh mein gott. My mind exploded to bits that magically rainbow shirtless Arthur can't help :iconohnoplz: Now I have to take therapy..
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icy-kisses Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Ok, I re-read it.

Cerebral damage has been increased a thousand-fold.



Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. :iconclapplz:
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaa, I'm replying to these out of order. |D
THANK YOU SO MUCH~! I must applaud you for being able to get through that tangled mass of text. ♥
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icy-kisses Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I totally forgot what I commented on, thus, I read it again.

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU I died again XDDDD
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The amusing thing about it is that even though you actually had to think about how to write this, for many it comes naturally....
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha, THAT WAS MY PLAN ALL ALONG.
Evil, yes?
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Homaigawd, that is so true! Hahaa, man ... how sad for those people. D:
I would never want that skill. |D
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icy-kisses Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:iconisayplz:, YOU EVIL SO-AND-SO, you seem to have caught me within your trap!
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
NYAHAHAA~! T'WAS THE MAJESTY OF MY RUSE!
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icy-kisses Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
THAT.
IS.
-froths at mouth-

I'M GOING TO ABUSE THAT PLZ NOW.
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
DO IT.
It wants to be loved by you~♥
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icy-kisses Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
....this..... this broke my brain....

Now that the damage has been done, I'm going to go back and re-read it. XD
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, it's definitely a brain breaker. |D
Not to mention it was hard enough to write, I love the people who take the time to try and wade through it, hahaa~
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icy-kisses Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
No worries. It's always a pleasure to read XDDD
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I greatly appreciate that~! :heart:
You honor it way more than it deserves. ;D
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ErinaEatYourBrains Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
I managed to struggle up to the bit where she started talking about her friends at which point i wisely lost the will to live.XD
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL! Yeah, this was actually quite hard to write, also, because I totally had to ignore every rule of grammar. XD I swear, whenever I see a Mary Sue story, this is how it is. Give or take the sheer amount of obnoxiousness I added. ;P

Glad you could get a kick out of it~! :heart:
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ErinaEatYourBrains Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
LULZ, yep, after at least an hour of just sitting there staring at a mary-sue story i'm STILL thinking: "WHAT?!? WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?!? WHAT DOES ANY OF THAT MEAN?!?" i found one the other day, and from the looks of it she was either making out with L, or doing a fantastic on-keyboard description talking with her mouth full of waffles.XD
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahahaa~! The way you described that was so freakin' perfect. :heart: For me, I don't really understand the logic of projecting yourself into a series just because you "love" one of the characters. Or, you know, they should at least keep them to themselves if they MUST write it. XD

BUT THEN WHAT WOULD PEOPLE MAKE FUN OF?
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ErinaEatYourBrains Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
LOL well, i do love to describe XD and i know exactly what you mean, some of these RPC's are MENTAL XD but what else would we mock?!? XD
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Kaname-Nakajima Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
.................................... did you ever read my immortal?
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I haven't, but I heard it's pretty awful.
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Kaname-Nakajima Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
want a link? XD
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Actually, I found the website it's on yesterday, I just didn't realize it was so long, hahaa~ I'll read it some time soon, though.
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Kaname-Nakajima Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD i cant remember where i got up to ^^; but i have it all saved on the comp XD its totally worth the time XD
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PeacockOre Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010
Oooohhhh I wanna liiinkkkkk oAo
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Kaname-Nakajima Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
[link] XD enjoy <3
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PeacockOre Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN- wooowwww seh sur ish a gr8 writr :I
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Devil-Kitty Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
t-this story... completely mind fucked me
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha, then the desired effect was reached. XD
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Lolium Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dude
i stopped breathing for a minute then.
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LLLLLLLMMMMFFFFFFAAAAAOOOOOOOO.
THAT WAS FUCKING BRILLIANT.
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Thank you so much! I'm actually surprised that anyone could get throught this with the horrendous amount of errors, and story line in general.
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Lolium Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LMAO
Muahahaha
You're welcomeee~

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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
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SavageValentine Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009
I meant to read this yesterday but I got distracted. I know, it's so hard to have to keep 'correcting' your spelling when making a parody like this. I tried it once, but I just couldn't do it!

Nywya yu shut up cuz Kidd is sooooooooo myne and e only hs hawtz 4 me!!!

... Nope, still can't do it. Too much dignity. You are a better person than I am... I hope.
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
It is SUPER hard! XD I was surprised at how much I had to think to spell so bad. ;P

Awwwww! We're both great people.
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SavageValentine Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Heh heh, what a place for great people like us who can spell!

By the way, how do you post stories on this site? I've tried and tried but it doesn't work. A lot of people go to fanfic.net, but I'd like to expand.
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly. XD

Well, it's not much different than submitting art, really. When you go to the submission screen, there will be a box for you to either upload your artwork or text.

You have to click on text, and then copy and paste your story into the box it gives you.

Also, you need to understand formatting if you want things to be bold or in italics or what not, because otherwise, it'll be simply in normal type with none of the fancy additions that FF allows you to keep.

Hope that helped! :heart: If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask.
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SavageValentine Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Huh, I'll have to work on it later. I've uploaded text fine, but after that it won't let me post it.
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? Hmmmm. That's so weird. I wish I could see it in person so I could help you better. ^^; I hope you figure it out!

Does it give you a message when you try to post it?
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SavageValentine Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2009
Well, I haven't tried in a while, so I forget. When I write my Kidd fic, I'll see what it says.
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay! I hope it works for you. :D
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SavageValentine Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Ahh! I accidently hit send!

Continuing, I have two ideas for two short Kidd one-shots. One involves fainting goats and beer, the other involves getting stuck in a hotel during a snowstorm (no, it doesn't turn out like The Shining) But I can't decided which one to work on first. You pick!
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Mahlyenki-Dyavol Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2009
urg...i think my just threw up my brain. i HATE mary sues so fucking much. i wish i had giant boobs and sparkled when i walked. naw, not really but still. this story made me laugh, then yell, and then cry. thats what happens when i encounter mary sues.
lol, great work though! :D
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
WHOA! Threw up your brain?! That's intense. And I would imagine quite painful. XD

Oh, I know right? Because that's just so awesome compared to living in reality. And I'm glad you liked it! Though, yes, it was hard to write, in a way. ;P
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Mahlyenki-Dyavol Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
it hurt a lot, and its sad people actually like it
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh gawd, I know right? It's kind of insulting when some people take their time to write something so well, and they get grouped into that category of "writing fanfiction doesn't equal talent." It's so insulting. DX
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Mahlyenki-Dyavol Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
grrr...i hate it when ppl do that
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Gawd! D: I know!!
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Mahlyenki-Dyavol Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
i always seem them randomly while looking up fics, and then they say: "what happens when zoro finds a girl floating on a raft? when he sees the girl he instantly falls in love! lol, me and my friend wrote this!"
i get really pissed when i see them :iconlawl-pls:

my sister gets freaked when she sees me cursing at my laptop
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thekingofqueens25 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
ACK!! DX THOSE ARE THE WORST!! Or "Me and my friends fall into the OP world and end up on the strawhats ship! CHAOS ENSUES!! I WAS ON A CAFFINE HIGH WHEN I WROTE THIS!!!1"

*Barf*

XD Well, it's all worth it, though.
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ochiba1110 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2009
this....this is...*sniff* the best thing i have ever read...
im so touched.. its a lot better then all of your other writing! D:
trixie! that's so sad.....why?! why trixie?! why....
well.. im going to drown in the toilet now...

wait..............bark bark fruit?! XDDD
i think you made your point though ;D~
imma read your fanfic now, though it will take me like 2 hours but its worth it ;3
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